Past/Present, Reveal/Bit by Bit
Hey guys, I know that I was a little inactive, but my story is still running. But for the character pages, I need to know, do we do them in past or present tense, and should I fill in everything, revealing my story, or add it as it gets released??
Some fixing up
Okay, this wiki, I love it, but, I was wandering if I can tweak with it a bit, like, a couple little things. I won't change colors, or fonts or anything, some Wiki Lab things. I want everyone's opinion before I make a move like that. So, please tell me what you think as all it takes is a few little clicks. Also, I want to know if you want talk pages or message walls, i don't want a lot of people upset for we have message walls.
Please get back to me on this fellow writers!
THG peetas POV
THE HUNGER GAMES ANOTHER POINT OF VIEW
CHAPTER 1
It was beyond pity I felt for her it was almost like I owed her. Somehow.
I know I didn’t owe her anything.
I feel the hot burn of the coals on my face, and hear he thud of the punch.
“feed it to the pig you stupid creature, why not! No one decent will buy burn bread!
My mother yelled
Now was my chance. I carried the big loaves outside. She looked weak.
I was about to walk to her and give them to her. But I realized that my mother was watching from the door frame, with her arms crossed.
She looked at me as if to get rid of the bread…
I started picking off bits of the bread, as small as I could to the pigs.
I took a quick glance at the door and he wads gone.. now was my chance. I threw the bread in the …